May 01, 2007
"Lake Swan Camp" by Alex Moore
The glistening gleamer reflected from afar.
The clouds illumined from a crescent moon.
Speckles of light are raining down.
All this light surrounded by darkness
Lights of different sizes,
But all still penetrate
All is either light or dark
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I wrote this one on spring break. I think I like it, but not sure. Help me improve, by sending comments! Please!
Thanks,
Alex
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