Wednesday, June 13, 2007

May 01, 2007


"Lake Swan Camp"  by Alex Moore

The glistening gleamer reflected from afar.
The clouds illumined from a crescent moon.
Speckles of light are raining down.
All this light surrounded by darkness
Lights of different sizes,
But all still penetrate
All is either light or dark

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I wrote this one on spring break.  I think I like it, but not sure. Help me improve, by sending comments! Please!

Thanks,
Alex

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